不好意思，来篇英文的

不紧张 · 发表于 2004-11-20 12:13

ONE SPECIAL PLACE IN MY LIFE
There are many special places in my memory, although a long time has past, I just can not dig it out of my mind.

I can’t forget the rock cliff on PANSHAN Mountain, the backyard of my hometown, where I attached myself to a side of a wall-liked stone cliff edge by fingers and feet inserting into one-inch-wide crevices, and where I hung myself on an egg-thick sapling which planted itself hardly in a cranny of a cliff side. When I looked down, there was only dark green color and fair blue fumes in the end of my eyesight.

I can’t help to recall another bluff in the TAISHAN Mountains, named SHANZIYA. It’s in the 2nd day of a 3days-4nights trip without support, no money or even food. I climbed reaching to the top in a morning of May, immediately, I was surprised by my facing: the gray blue mountains behind the green ones faraway was touching blue sky, clouds filled among mountains a little village set in a fogy valley, blurred and bright. The vision just being there silently liked a painting with live; liked a dream in true-life, that made me forget hunger, forget fatigue and loneliness.
If most of places I have been exposed me to challenge and adventure, well then the next place would give me a real relax. That is a bathtub in my girl-friend’s apartment. I used to spend my weekend with her in an apartment located on the margin of the city. We usually coked together and then had dinner with candles. After I reposed in sofa, she must have prepared the bath water with bath cube or perfume dropped in as well as petals. While I lied down in such warm water, she would set a tea-table beside the bathtub and put my cigarette holder, smoking set and coffee on it. She would never forget to move candles in. while I was smoking and enjoying the peace, she had a seat on the toilet’s lid, looked at me, and began to chat with me. Some times about my new poetry, some times about her sentiment, some times just some tender voice. She didn’t need my answer, at this time I always feed back a smile that is what she wants. When the sweet air around me in the bathroom, the time seems freezing, the pain and wild thought in my heart seems calm down, but…

How brave its are, however, the remembrances have past away with time, become yesterday, like the current of Saskatchewan River will never come back. What leaves with me is much ado about nothing.

三思 · 发表于 2004-11-20 13:07

头晕中，谁扶我一把！

三思 · 发表于 2004-11-20 13:15

偶磕磕绊绊地把这段 “鸟语”看完了。晕倒了！弟弟你福气好啊！
同志们就看倒数第二段吧！

不紧张 · 发表于 2004-11-20 13:36

哈哈哈，让您见笑了三思姐。我来扶您

小叶子 · 发表于 2004-11-20 13:49

So Romantic!!!

三思 · 发表于 2004-11-20 13:51

Originally posted by tutu at 2004-11-20 02:49 PM:& w2 l3 w" @) N" \! Z
So Romantic!!!

偶角着：so pornographic

小叶子 · 发表于 2004-11-20 13:51

Oldnavy, you are very senstive and thoughful!

不紧张 · 发表于 2004-11-20 14:07

Originally posted by tutu at 2004-11-20 14:51:
6 f j V* r5 W \$ AOldnavy, you are very senstive and thoughful!

？？:o不好意思我没查找这两个词。感情丰富的还是细腻的？有思想的还是体贴的？真不好意思其实我的单词量巨小。用英语写文章简直是浪费生命。要想用准确一个词我通常要查八个到十个词，既觉得时间上太浪费又觉得英语词汇本身很有局限性。这是一篇遭到我的老师谬赞的短文，权且拿来滥竽充数吧。

不紧张 · 发表于 2004-11-20 14:22

Originally posted by 三思 at 2004-11-20 14:51:
1 m9 T2 N! G+ M* H7 g2 P/ _偶角着：so pornographic

姐姐的色心是出了名的，胆子又大，从不避讳。我哪敢圣人面前卖三字经呀。

linda · 发表于 2004-11-20 15:09

哈哈，good life

三思 · 发表于 2004-11-20 15:15

Originally posted by oldnavy at 2004-11-20 03:22 PM:- [' G8 S7 T# H# p9 j9 B
姐姐的色心是出了名的，胆子又大，从不避讳。我哪敢圣人面前卖三字经呀。

:lol::lol:
我有心无力啊！
你这倒数第二段，我找个最合适的词形容，应该是：惬意

流浪者 · 发表于 2004-11-20 16:53

Originally posted by 三思 at 2004-11-20 01:07 PM:
) v. O6 [$ @ ?! ~头晕中，谁扶我一把！

俺找不着北了。

小叶子 · 发表于 2004-11-20 18:24

Sorry, I made mistake. I mean you are sensitive and thoughtful!!

Originally posted by oldnavy at 2004-11-20 03:07 PM:* L0 w' z2 C2 J" }/ J( _9 [
？？:o不好意思我没查找这两个词。感情丰富的还是细腻的？有思想的还是体贴的？真不好意思其实我的单词量巨小。用英语写文章简直是浪费生命。要想用准确一个词我通常要查八个到十个词，既觉得时间上太浪费又觉得 ...

悟空 · 发表于 2004-11-20 19:21

兄弟你回来探亲了?

悟空 · 发表于 2004-11-20 19:25

Originally posted by oldnavy at 2004-11-20 01:13 PM:If most of places I have been exposed me to challenge and adventure, well then the next place would give me a real relax. That is a bathtub in my girl-friend’s apartment. I used to spend my weekend with her in an apartment located on the margin of the city. We usually coked together and then had dinner with candles. After I reposed in sofa, she must have prepared the bath water with bath cube or perfume dropped in as well as petals. While I lied down in such warm water, she would set a tea-table beside the bathtub and put my cigarette holder, smoking set and coffee on it. She would never forget to move candles in. while I was smoking and enjoying the peace, she had a seat on the toilet’s lid, looked at me, and began to chat with me. Some times about my new poetry, some times about her sentiment, some times just some tender voice. She didn’t need my answer, at this time I always feed back a smile that is what she wants. When the sweet air around me in the bathroom, the time seems freezing, the pain and wild thought in my heart seems calm down, but- W& J" S% L+ U& g# M: c
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好不容易看了三思推荐的倒数第二段. 兄弟好福气啊.

[ Last edited by 悟空 on 2004-11-20 at 09:22 PM ]

悟空 · 发表于 2004-11-20 19:34

Originally posted by oldnavy at 2004-11-20 01:13 PM:
/ X5 K S1 h/ R' v3 @" YHow brave its are, however, the remembrances have past away with time, become yesterday, like the current of Saskatchewan River will never come back. What leaves with me is much ado about nothing...

同声高唱" YESTERDAY ONCE MORE"

CAY · 发表于 2004-11-20 22:06

太难了！头晕了！

杜杜 · 发表于 2004-11-20 22:15

请教楼主是哪里人?

杜杜 · 发表于 2004-11-20 22:16

PANSHAN Mountain盘山?

水晶思维 · 发表于 2004-11-20 22:36

羡慕中．．．．．．

不紧张 · 发表于 2004-11-21 00:41

Originally posted by 杜杜 at 2004-11-20 23:15:
6 {7 h1 @" @$ ]+ T+ a2 A6 F; m$ f请教楼主是哪里人?

与你同乡！;)

不紧张 · 发表于 2004-11-21 00:42

Originally posted by tutu at 2004-11-20 19:24:- R6 H, u" P& q' t( N: g1 ?
Sorry, I made mistake. I mean you are sensitive and thoughtful!!

谢谢夸奖，有时也深受其累。

杜杜 · 发表于 2004-11-21 00:51

Originally posted by oldnavy at 2004-11-21 01:41 AM:
# F2 z: v7 t+ Y) M, G: ]7 c与你同乡！;)

你怎么知道我是哪里人?莫非真是..人?可惜,我都没去过盘山.

阿童木 · 发表于 2004-11-21 21:04

nice writing.

cottonball · 发表于 2004-11-22 11:56

好牛的chinglish.

流浪者 · 发表于 2004-11-22 13:50

Originally posted by 根号3 at 2004-11-22 11:56 AM:, n5 w! O' M. j
好牛的chinglish.

哈哈哈，哥们是否想要汉语原文看看？:lol::lol::lol:

今天闲着 · 发表于 2004-11-22 16:55

Originally posted by 流浪者 at 2004-11-22 20:50:
+ x8 O' \* i5 z- M2 d6 O( C哈哈哈，哥们是否想要汉语原文看看？:lol::lol::lol:

哈哈哈，我看那个蚊子也够他咬半天的！:lol:

流浪者 · 发表于 2004-11-22 19:13

Originally posted by 今天闲着 at 2004-11-22 04:55 PM:
- m( V' k8 ], t: y哈哈哈，我看那个蚊子也够他咬半天的！:lol:

哈哈哈，I'd fire you if you were the teacher who corrected Oldnavy's article. :lol::lol::lol:

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不好意思，来篇英文的

YESTERDAY ONCE MORE

啥时我也能写这么段＂靓丽＂的鸟语？