我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

9 c/ R- ?- i1 V5 z2 o, y7 G. F6 n/ QFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
( ^, H9 H8 h% o1 G) j# [( X0 STo my life and dream.
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0 f0 W/ ]7 g1 N7 N$ ^/ Z& SFollowing the summer's step,
! {' B% r& i- @Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
! u0 r: z. Q: j4 N' ]: `/ @Good-bye, my childish dream.
# N# C- [9 J+ T+ f( p' @I can prepare nothing;
; A8 V5 B, l2 x3 W! J( P, hMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
8 C% l: Q4 s/ d1 f  rIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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4 Q4 [$ I0 j+ N( h[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
6 N5 W4 R- C, y4 O' \) n: ], a夏天来了